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  • 04-03-2021
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What is the best change we can make to this sentence?
When I opened my present I let out a yell.

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monsourboys2
monsourboys2 monsourboys2
  • 04-03-2021

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I let out a scream? maybe, because yell sound like its scary, so maybe "When I opened my present I let out a scream of joy"

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nicolecarbine03
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  • 04-03-2021
When i opened this mysterious present, my stomach begun to flutter, I was excited but nervous of what could be inside. As soon I opened it I let out a a squeal that deafened my own ears.
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